2017山西中考英語寫作范文_(2)
2017山西中考英語寫作范文_
山西中考英語寫作范文篇4
?、?書面表達(共15分)
81.(15分).向他人表達善意并幫助他人體現了一個人良好的品格.當你向被人表達善意并給他人提供幫助時，你希望得到回報(repay)嗎?針對這一話題，九年級六班的同學們展開了辯論.
假設你是正方或反方的一員，請圍繞你的觀點，結合自己的親身經歷，說出2至3條理由來說服同學們(只需選擇一方觀點表達即可).
要求：1.詞數不少于80詞;
2.文章的開頭已給出，不計入總詞數;
3.文中不得出現真實的人名、校名.
When I show kindness and help others，I ________________________________________________________
When I show kindness and help others，I never expect them to repay me.(選擇一方觀點) In my view，helping others gives me a strong feeling of being needed and brings me happyness.On the other hand，everyone may get into trouble and need help，too.(說明理由)
Several days ago，while I was having a walk in the park，I found a little boy crying.(高分句型)Then I asked him what was the matter，and he told me he couldn't find his mom.Luckily，he remembered his mother's phone number.So I called her immediately.Ten minutes later，the boy saw his mom and became excited.His mom was so thankful that she wanted to buy me a small gift，but I refused.(高分句型)At that time，I felt quite happy because I did something really good.(舉例)
All in all，the world needs love and we should be ready to help others without expecting any repay.If you wanted repay，a"Thanks"would be enough.(高分句型)(總結)
【點評】寫圖畫作文時，首先要看懂圖畫所表達的內容，最好列一下提綱，然后根據提綱進行寫作就不會造成離題或偏題，但要注意，文章必須要覆蓋整個要點，行文要注意簡化，不要拖沓冗長，要使用正確的句子，同時注意，要使用一定的連接詞，比如：first，second，what's more，finally等.再者，在作文完成時要注意檢查、修改，如果有時間可以先寫到草稿紙上，再抄到答題紙上，這樣更容易得高分.最后，注意使用一些句型和短語，使整篇文章意思連貫、流暢，方能成就一篇好的作文.
山西中考英語寫作范文篇5
題目要求
學生綜合素質評價的方式多種多樣，同伴互評是其中較為有效的方式之一，它可以讓學生不斷體驗成長和學習過程中的進步，并正確認識自我，保持自信。
某班一個小組正在進行階段性同伴互評活動，如果你是該組組長，請結合本組討論情況，為本組某位同學寫一份激勵性評價報告，內容須包含以下要點：
1. the skill / the advantage / the personal quality the student has
2. one thing the student did
3. some advice for the student
【要求】
1. 詞數80詞左右;
2. 不得出現真實的人名、校名。
參考范文：
Han Mei is an easygoing girl who gets along well with everyone. She is also talented in performing. What’s the most important, she is warm-hearted.
Once she knew a girl in her neighbourhood had so serious an illness that a large amount of money was needed. She put forward a suggestion calling on all the kids to give away pocket money to the unlucky girl. Besides, she organized a charity show to raise more money. When the girl and her parents got the money, they were really moved.
Han Mei should also put more time and energy into study and try to be a student with both a kind heart and good grades.
參考翻譯：
韓梅為人隨和，跟所有同學相處得都很好。她在表演上特別有天賦。最重要的是，韓梅還是一個熱心腸的姑娘。
記得有一次，當她知道鄰家的女孩病得很嚴重，急需一大筆醫藥費時，她提議同學們募捐自己的零用錢，幫助這位可憐的女孩。此外，她還組織了一場慈善活動以期籌到更多的錢。當那位女孩和她的父母得到這筆捐助時，他們很受感動。
韓梅也應該投入更多的時間與精力在學業上，努力成為一名品學兼優的好學生。
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